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Jack Herlocker's avatar

Love the cover for FF!

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Gary Spangler's avatar

Reader was stymied by “the sound of ticking” for a bit. While he was certain it wasn’t coming from the ticking of the chair cushions, the facts escaped him. His scrunched up brow refused to un-scrunch! A time bomb? An ancient Big Ben alarm clock?? The grandfather clock in typist’s home outside the studio door?

After rereading the story, there was my answer. The wall clock! For this hearing impaired reader, the muffled ticks from our battery powered kitchen wall clock are inaudible except when all is still, late at night. I would need something to tick with the force of Big Ben in London.

But I would still love to disappear into the foggy forest!

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